Final Portfolio
I have had an eventful semester
in English class, since I'm not use to doing it online. Still I have managed to
do it all. If you go on my blog you would see that I've kept all of my work up
to date and done on time. I'm punctual for English. Never missing without an
excuse. I sit alone near the teacher, since it helps me not to have any
distractions. I always get my work done. But my mind tends to wander, so I have
to ask "what did I miss" a couple of times, but I usually just figure
it out for my self. When commenting I don't do it a lot, but I like to ask
questions as well as make it useful like
Romeo and Rosaline never dated. That's why he was sad, do
you think your opinion would be diffrent if they had?
Or
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Do you
prefer it over Romeo and Juliet
I have made corrections to my work from comment like this.
neuf Sep 18, 2013
Do you have examples of times you have been in charge? What does it look like?
One of my favorite assignments was the tattoo assignment. It was well done and showed a lot about me. I haven't done as many comments as others, but I think the ones I did were well thought out and useful, usually. I enjoy commenting more in class then online, I was very active during Romeo and Juliet. In this I think I deserve a 31.5% since I didn't let my distractions stop me from succeeding, it only affected me, and I was helpful.
I had some problems with spelling and grammar in class. Mainly "are" and "our" but spell check kept me from being to bad. I did comment online though I preferred to speak vocally, like Neuf. I've had problems making connections, my best though was to Chris in the Curious incident of the dog in the night time, I have a lot of the same personality traits as Chris, at times. I never had much problems in the class, probably since I read a lot and my moms an English teacher, so I had a tendency to wander off at times, but that didn't really affect my work at all. In this I think I deserve a 31% since I did good work, handed it in on time, commented, and went back and fixed my mistakes (sometimes).
I always did my best in class, I'm not the best at helping unless I'm positive of my work, but I haven't really been asked to help in class. So the best I do is answer the questions when asked, comment as helpfully as possible, and hand in my work A.S.A.P so Neuf can use it for his lesson. I learned a lot about computer, like how much they can be a pain and how to make accounts on blogger. I'm the kind of person who does what's need from them. In this I think I have a 29% since I did what was needed and I did contribute but I could have done more.
I think I deserve a 92.5% or at least a high B, if you have any problems please comment.
I always did my best in class, I'm not the best at helping unless I'm positive of my work, but I haven't really been asked to help in class. So the best I do is answer the questions when asked, comment as helpfully as possible, and hand in my work A.S.A.P so Neuf can use it for his lesson. I learned a lot about computer, like how much they can be a pain and how to make accounts on blogger. I'm the kind of person who does what's need from them. In this I think I have a 29% since I did what was needed and I did contribute but I could have done more.
I think I deserve a 92.5% or at least a high B, if you have any problems please comment.
Don't forget to finish the rest of your final report card post, you work really hard and are great at english I think you deserve an A for sure! Try to post some pictures to support your thoughts!!:)
ReplyDeleteEmma please read the assignment page carefully and finish off all three of the main pillars with details and examples like you have for commenting. I want to hear your opinion about the pillars, your effort, the class?. :)
ReplyDeleteMissing the 3 PLO examples too? :)
ReplyDeleteGood idea's Emma, try looking at the assignment a little more to see what your missing.
ReplyDeleteEMMA!!! I am running out time. I guess I will have to just give you a mark. Not completing the final assignment is sort of a little snapshot of your year. You are so bright, and have awesome unique thoughts about what we worked through this year. You are honest about your work this year too, but often complete the assignments in your own way. :) I can relate to that. Moving forward as a lover of books you are well on your way, but if you want to explore academia you need to learn to focus the personal perspective into the style of writing for a specific audience. Your mom can help you with that, but part of it starts (like this final) with understanding and addressing the criteria. :) Thanks for sitting near me all year and making me smile so much. I'm going to split the difference of your marks range and go 86%.
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