Tybalt's and Romeo have a awful relationship, built on the hate of the feud. Tybalt is unforgiving of Romeo's action's no matter how small they are. At the party Tybalt swears vengeance on Romeo even though they only snuck into the party and didn't cause any trouble intentionally "I will withdraw, but this intrusion shall, Now seeming sweet, convert to bitterest gall". When the 2 meet face to face for the fight Romeo stand's down, not because he care's about Tybalt but because he had just wed Juliet "Love thee better than thou canst devise Till thou shalt know the reason of my love." And doesn't want to fight him because he is Juliet's cousin. The relationship take a dark turn after Tybalt kill's Mercutio, Romeo's friend, causing Romeo to go after Tybalt killing him.
A better relationship is the one between Juliet and the nanny. The nanny is more of a mother to Juliet than her actually mother, being that she raised her "thou was thee prettiest babe I ever nursed" the nanny is caring and always want's the best for Juliet even if she disagrees about her decisions.
Nice job finding quotes as support. I encourage you to delve deeper into the characters. Your choice for Tybalt and Romeo, while correct, is fairly obvious. I think your perceive more than this, so reach for the next layer of Shakespeare's social commentary. Keep watching your grammar rules as I notice you drop capitals on proper nouns and such. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job, you put good detail into it and described it well, maybe you could add a bit more:)
ReplyDeleteI think if you added a bit more it would be perfect. Great job on finding solid facts to back up on your writing. Good job
ReplyDeletei liked your concepts but few grammar mistakes. Great blog though
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